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16th May 2020, 9:50 PM


The tension is building fast! I'm really loving this scene and how it just grows!

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24th May 2020, 11:50 AM

Joshua Humphries

Thanks for all the compliments Mrremoraman! Of course, reading 2 submitted pages a week will make a story seem super drawn out (slow) but hopefully it's smoother paced when each scene is read after completion (book form one day)

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